Thursday, 12 February 2015

Ruby and Spencer

I felt as if the date scene between Ruby and Spencer should have elaborated more on their feelings and maybe shown a deeper connection. I felt as if the scene made the love out to be more of a temporary spark a they both are having a hard time in the rebellion. I think we should have maybe spoken more previous feeling and shown how the characters were hiding an romantic connection behind their tough exteriors.
We could have done this by having them have a deep discussion and slowly both reveal how they feel and end the scene with them deciding they want to have a relationship because I feel as though (despite Ruby's and Spencer's actions) the relationship wasn't clear enough and maybe wasn't explained enough.   

No comments:

Post a Comment