We could have done this by having them have a deep discussion and slowly both reveal how they feel and end the scene with them deciding they want to have a relationship because I feel as though (despite Ruby's and Spencer's actions) the relationship wasn't clear enough and maybe wasn't explained enough.
Thursday, 12 February 2015
Ruby and Spencer
I felt as if the date scene between Ruby and Spencer should have elaborated more on their feelings and maybe shown a deeper connection. I felt as if the scene made the love out to be more of a temporary spark a they both are having a hard time in the rebellion. I think we should have maybe spoken more previous feeling and shown how the characters were hiding an romantic connection behind their tough exteriors.
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